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Shauna
is on page 243 of 410
I have mixed feelings. On one hand the story is very entertaining. On the other, there are numerous editing and continuity issues that kind of throw me out of it. For example, Elspeth has a broken arm but somehow both of them worked during a make out session with Otello. Go figure. 🙄
— Jan 13, 2026 03:16AM
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Shauna
is on page 353 of 410
Why is the editing in this book SO BAD?!😭
Also, Elspeth, YOU ARE A MORON.
— Jan 19, 2026 04:31AM
Also, Elspeth, YOU ARE A MORON.
Shauna
is on page 304 of 410
The editing on this book reeeeally needs work.
And I don’t understand why they don’t cut the lock on the chain cuffing them together??? Or pick it? Or cast a spell on it to open it? Perhaps them being cuffed together is supposed to be symbolic or something, but it’s a little unrealistic to me.
— Jan 15, 2026 12:25PM
And I don’t understand why they don’t cut the lock on the chain cuffing them together??? Or pick it? Or cast a spell on it to open it? Perhaps them being cuffed together is supposed to be symbolic or something, but it’s a little unrealistic to me.
Shauna
is on page 32 of 410
Editing could be a little better. A few minor discrepancies in the plot, but otherwise an enjoyable read so far.
— Jan 04, 2026 04:00PM
