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In my book, the Serpent's Shadow, the perspective is switched between the two main characters Carter and Sadie. This is kind of annoying because there are two different journeys happening so one is with Carter while the other is with Sadie. If I were to revise my book, I would change it to just one perspective. This would make it less confusing.

In my book, The Serpent's Shadow, Carter and Sadie Kane are trying to save the world from going to chaos. It is kind of boring and the point of view switches between the two main characters,. It is a bit all over the place. As soon as I start to get into it, it switches point of views. This is the reason I have not liked it.

In my book, The Serpent's Shadow, Carter and Sadie Kane are trying to save the world from going to chaos. It is kind of boring and the point of view switches between the two main characters,. It is a bit all over the place. As soon as I start to get into it, it switches point of views. This is the reason I have not liked it.