Jolene ’s Reviews > The Traitor Baru Cormorant > Status Update
Jolene
is 25% done
Wtf is this pacing, I sometimes feel like I'm having a stroke
Why are we skimming whole plots in a paragraph??
The story is good and I like Baru so far, but jesus the writing.......
— Nov 16, 2025 03:39PM
Why are we skimming whole plots in a paragraph??
The story is good and I like Baru so far, but jesus the writing.......
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