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How did the pacing get WORSE

Alright the murder subplot appears to have been forgotten entirely

Sorry she's been essential kidnapped and coerced into being this guy's sex toy and her concern is that he's a cannibal who wants to fatten her up to sell to other cannibals??? Something is wrong with Trisha Paytas's brain

Aside from the fact that this is definitely more horror than the erotica it's marketed as: the pacing is atrocious

I don't know what word I think we should use but neither "secretions" nor "juices" are words I want to see in sex scenes unless they're really good scenes

And now our protagonist has become a rapist

Our protagonist saying her parents are crazy but she's not when she's demonstrably worse than her parents is hilarious

Not what bipolar is but okay

"I never wanted those pills to begin with"

Wh

What pills

Why is she talking about the alter ego she made up like she's a real person 😭