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The story itself is intriguing but it feels brutal going through it right now.
1. The entire first book was all about rejecting her mates. Why are we doing this again in the second book?
2. Sometimes the writing feels off. It's not bad writing. It's good writing, but maybe too good for this kind of setting. I don't know how to explain this, but the big words and academic writing made me reread sentences a lot.
— Nov 14, 2025 08:04PM
1. The entire first book was all about rejecting her mates. Why are we doing this again in the second book?
2. Sometimes the writing feels off. It's not bad writing. It's good writing, but maybe too good for this kind of setting. I don't know how to explain this, but the big words and academic writing made me reread sentences a lot.
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