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Joy
is 29% done
It did finally start getting good. I feel like now that I'm passed the info dumping, the beginning set up, and finally to the plot, it's all coming together. I still have some gripes, but it's growing on me.
— Nov 12, 2025 05:19PM
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Joy
is 43% done
Yeah, nope, it should have been for me. Basically, adult Harry Potter mixed with mafia set in a fantasy world. But it was really the writing for me, it felt like YA talking about adult things. the info dumping was so bad that the info didn't feel relevant, and the plot felt all over the place. The main character is supposed to be like 27 acts like 17 and she infiltrates the bloodmoons (magical mafia) in like 3 days
— Nov 13, 2025 04:11PM
Joy
is 32% done
You can't keep telling me your main character is smart when she keeps doing dumb shit.
— Nov 13, 2025 05:40AM
Joy
is 16% done
This book basically has to the end of my work day to hook me. Otherwise, I'm dnfing
— Nov 12, 2025 03:46AM
Joy
is 4% done
Might change, but right now, it's giving au harry potter fanfiction
— Nov 10, 2025 06:35AM
