Jenny’s Reviews > That Summer: Part One > Status Update
Jenny
is 24% done
There are a lot of grammar mistakes in it little ones but still enough that make it noticeable. I don't feel the chemistry between the 2 main characters and she's supposedly head over heels for the guy and the guy is clearly a controlling son of a bitch and it's also clear that he'll end up abusing her it's so clear yet she STILL ends up having a relationship with the guy?
— Dec 19, 2016 03:11PM
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Jenny
is 24% done
There are a lot of grammar mistakes in it little ones but still enough that make it noticeable. I don't feel the chemistry between the 2 main characters and she's supposedly head over heels for the guy and the guy is clearly a controlling son of a bitch and it's also clear that he'll end up abusing her it's so clear yet she STILL ends up having a relationship with the guy?
— Dec 19, 2016 03:11PM
