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Lauren
Lauren is 5% done
I want to like this book but the lack of ability, or possibly just lack of effort, to follow the most basic rules of the english language is making this impossible to enjoy.
Oct 27, 2025 10:08PM
I Feed Her to the Beast and the Beast Is Me (I Feed Her to the Beast, #1)

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Lauren
Lauren is 3% done
I'm not asking for inspiring or ground breaking prose, I just want an author or an editor that knows "slenderer" isn't correct. For heavens sake, does no one care what we are publishing? No matter the draw of the premise, a book will always be ruined by pedestrian writing and poor/nonexistant editing.
Oct 27, 2025 10:06PM
I Feed Her to the Beast and the Beast Is Me (I Feed Her to the Beast, #1)


Lauren
Lauren is 4% done
The concept of this book is great. The subject matter is right up my alley but you can't just skate by on concept. Asking for the basic rules on english composition to be followed shouldn't be too much. Again I ask, who is editing modern books?
Oct 27, 2025 10:06PM
I Feed Her to the Beast and the Beast Is Me (I Feed Her to the Beast, #1)


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