Steven Allen’s Reviews > 2288 A.D. - Alternate Dimensions > Status Update

You would think that with Ashlyn being pregnant, and using all of these mind powers, that she would be very, very hungry. Our minds are one of the greediest organs in our bodies, and for someone to summon such power, change her shape, etc. would demand a massive intake of calories to support. Nothing like conservation of energy to poke holes in a fiction story.

A mindless, no-brainer, but still some fun escapist literature. Needs a better editor, as I have already found two glaring errors. Assignation instead of assassination. Must be using either auto correct (which will occasionally screw you) or just used the wrong word in the sentence.