Philip Edward’s Reviews > I'm Starting to Worry About This Black Box of Doom > Status Update

Let’s see if he can nail the ending.

I’ve just finished up a conversation between two of the main characters and the biggest gripe I have is that, although the ideas they cover are interesting, they don’t really have a unique manner of speaking to differentiate between the two. Halfway down a page, in the middle of a conversation, and I could not tell who was speaking just from their verbal mannerisms.