Jonathan K (Max Outlier)’s Reviews > Land of the Blind > Status Update

Mediocre at best. As the reader nears the end there's hope for a plot twist but unfortunately it never arrives. A guy spends two plus days at the police station writing his life story while stating it's a murder confession. lol. Avery brief 3 star review tomorrow

It's good but I still feel all the overuse high school back story diminishes reader engagement. Classic computer game startup and greed along with holding on to past disappointments resulting in the worst. Probably a 3.5 on the Richter scale

One of the more depressing stories I've read in ages.

It's OK. Just wish the pace wasn't as slow as it is. Nearing the last act I have an idea how it's going to end

More high school memories than anything which means it's repetitive as heck

While the plot and characters are unique, I find the long winded back story used while Clark pens his confession drags the pace down. Since most authors use personal experience I can't help but think Walter is revisiting his high school years

Not bad but not great either. Reading about a high school bully and others isn't unique though using it as back story to a written crime confession most definitely is

I like it.. Stylish narrative and unique