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I know she's bitter that she doesn't have a mom, but I feel like she's not giving her stepmom a chance. She could literally go dress shopping with her.
Michael has as much personality as wet paint. Watching Liz try to force things with him is painful.
And the only Wes I know is Wes Craven, so this name she says a thousand times is super distracting. I can't get past that.
And there's a lot of OMGs.
— Aug 20, 2025 09:10AM
I know she's bitter that she doesn't have a mom, but I feel like she's not giving her stepmom a chance. She could literally go dress shopping with her.
Michael has as much personality as wet paint. Watching Liz try to force things with him is painful.
And the only Wes I know is Wes Craven, so this name she says a thousand times is super distracting. I can't get past that.
And there's a lot of OMGs.
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Why is his whole personality that he has a southern accent? And has cats?
— Aug 20, 2025 09:19AM
R.G.
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I've probably watched more rom-coms than the main character. But starting chapters with quotes from them is super distracting.
Sometimes, they feel forced and out of place. One or two... sure. But every chapter? We get it. The book is a rom-com.
And if you’re going to quote Ten Things I Hate About You... be sure the mmc has a personality.
The fmc has so much anxiety, her inner thoughts make me anxious for her.
— Aug 20, 2025 09:16AM
Sometimes, they feel forced and out of place. One or two... sure. But every chapter? We get it. The book is a rom-com.
And if you’re going to quote Ten Things I Hate About You... be sure the mmc has a personality.
The fmc has so much anxiety, her inner thoughts make me anxious for her.
