Sissy Bee’s Reviews > Embrace > Status Update
Sissy Bee
is 30% done
My biggest critique is the over description on the characters. It takes me out of the story and doesn't really serve a purpose other than hooray! Her lips are still glossy red!
— Oct 20, 2016 04:06PM
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Sissy Bee
is 60% done
I think I already know who the Countess is masquerading as...
— Oct 27, 2016 09:50PM
Sissy Bee
is 42% done
This series is definitely reminiscent of Buffy the Vampire Slayer. Whether that's a good or bad thing, I'll leave up to you to decide.
— Oct 26, 2016 12:34PM
Sissy Bee
is 37% done
Oh, dear. Switching the tense in which the narrative is taking place in mid-sentence. Yikes.
— Oct 24, 2016 07:06PM
Sissy Bee
is 26% done
Ok, so if there's one trope I love, it's when old mystical beings are being introduced to modern day technology and are just fascinated by it. "What mystical forces compel this rectangular box to make the corn of pop, pop?"
— Oct 13, 2016 09:24AM
Sissy Bee
is 24% done
Nooooo! Don't fall for this dude! I was all prepared for angsty "I can't fall for the attractive demon because he's a demon and I'm the good guy" romance!
— Oct 13, 2016 08:43AM
Sissy Bee
is 12% done
I am not ashamed to admit that I DID NOT SEE THAT COMING.
— Oct 10, 2016 05:34AM
Sissy Bee
is 5% done
It's a little...odd...that a college professor would call in the parents for a meeting. Or is that just me? College kids aren't really kids--they're adults.
— Oct 06, 2016 03:47PM
