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Aditi
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this is really the most confusing relationship dynamic, like you mean to tell me they are bound for life and would die for each other and practically live on top of each other and KISS ON THE MOUTH SOMETIMES?? but think their love is unrequited??? like what 😭
— Aug 01, 2025 11:18PM
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Aditi
is 40% done
narrative haunted by the ghost of love interest's dead brother and main character's dead nation...
— Jul 26, 2025 12:29AM
Aditi
is 18% done
wait hold up it got interesting... I'm locke-d in (ha ha get it? because Locke? ok sorry)
— Jul 25, 2025 10:50PM
Aditi
is 11% done
This looked so good, but I fear the beginning has me wary... it seems to be falling into all the patented romantasy tropes too early for my tastes. I think this deep and unwavering bond between Kier and Grey is happening too soon and too intensely (for the reader) to warrant harping on about it all the time. Within the first few pages, they are sharing a bedroll and kissing each other's palms!
Anyway, we shall see!
— Jun 27, 2025 07:44PM
Anyway, we shall see!
