Cheryl Archer’s Reviews > Heat of the Everflame > Status Update

This book is LONG!! I’m trying to remember all of the details but it’s starting to get lost. It could have been slimmed down with some talented editing and reworking. The story is excellent but it’s verbose and that’s causing the story to lose its effect. And BY THE FLAMES! How blind can everyone possibly be?! I get creating suspense but if a realm really depended on these people I’d be worried!