Morgana’s Reviews > The Whispered Word > Status Update

Ezekiel and Jedidiah must be family

Damn this chick has no ID and they just served her

THE PLEDGE OF ALLEGIANCE

is this bitch making shit up

What parent would talk like this? Too feel good for me.

Nora = Mommy now

Oh my god just let this girl GO. she obviously does not like being around you

I hardly call seeing an ad for the new business in town as an example of a recurring theme

Nah cuz the brother got to pick last time, and the mother wanted them to take turns, and she successfully facilitated them sharing. So why does Nora insert herself and get all high and mighty

This feels like someone else wrote this section

Bit of a slow start considering the reader already knows the characters and the town. I feel like there is a lot of fluff strewn about and it’s taking a long time to move along the plot