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is 70% done
It's really a bunch of stuff the author thought cool thrown together - there should be urgency but eventhing from dialogue to narration is so stiff.
Because really why am I reading a flashback of the guy helping a woman give birth in an elevator, during what should be a tense moment?
— Jun 30, 2025 02:13AM
Because really why am I reading a flashback of the guy helping a woman give birth in an elevator, during what should be a tense moment?
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Jun 30, 2025 05:44AM
scusa, ma ho riso
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è riuscito ad aiutarla perché ha letto tante volte il libro di un'ostetrica degli anni 50
