Michela Walters’s Reviews > Unsportsmanlike Conduct > Status Update
Michela Walters
is 55% done
Lord, how is this only halfway... I have enjoyed these stories in the past, but for some reason, this one has so much internal dialogue and not as much 'showing' and it's kind of killing me.
— Sep 21, 2016 03:44PM
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Michela Walters
is 45% done
So much telling. I have enjoyed this series in the past, just bummed Henry is telling me how to feel about Kristin's secret instead of showing me how living with it. Kristin and Pasha's internal thoughts just keep taking me out of the story with all the details they are telling me about instead of showing me.
— Sep 19, 2016 09:18AM
