malin’s Reviews > Onyx Storm > Status Update

i wanna dnf so bad lord help me

so much is happening i wish the escalation was more deliberate. its all over the place atm

i can’t bring myself to care. ofc they’re going on ANOTHER mission. ugh. how is this even ending idk what kind of payoff could satisfy atp

place name upon place name i have no idea of where they are or where they’re going bro

random side plots. random characters. random dreams. stakes non-existent. tf is this

so much and absolutely nothing going on at the same time? just dialogue scene upon dialogue scene and the chapters are blurring together… the potential of this series really did die with iron flame it seems but we’ll see

why is every chapter ending on a mini cliffhanger when the scene literally continues the next page