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It's getting way better now. I am once again invested in this story
— Apr 22, 2025 09:00AM
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Ayzha
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Eh, it's okay. I was really invested in the beginning because the first few pages really piqued my interest. But now.... There's. Nothing. H A P P E N I N G (○ ___ ○)
Like at all.
The story is going nowhere.
I will, however, finish it because I need to know what happened to Amelie.
— Apr 15, 2025 08:09AM
Like at all.
The story is going nowhere.
I will, however, finish it because I need to know what happened to Amelie.
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Apr 22, 2025 01:27PM
Ok wait one POV is in 1st person and the rest (like 3 I think) are in 3rd and its very jarring
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