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Why would Tyndarius make an alliance with the Atreidi’s to ascend to the throne of Sparta, and not one of his sons? What!?!
— Apr 16, 2025 07:55PM
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Chapter 7 is the turning point. The brutish Mycenae brothers have made this more interesting.
— Apr 16, 2025 09:19AM
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Oof, I’m struggling with this novel. On the cusp of Chapter 7, and I just don’t like the author’s approach to this.
First,I think this would be much better if written in first person POV from Clytemnestra’s perspective. This third person limited/omniscient is killing me. I don’t care about any of these characters.
Second, why not call the sun Helios and the moon Selene. Small tweaks; big difference.
— Apr 15, 2025 08:59PM
First,I think this would be much better if written in first person POV from Clytemnestra’s perspective. This third person limited/omniscient is killing me. I don’t care about any of these characters.
Second, why not call the sun Helios and the moon Selene. Small tweaks; big difference.
