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Apr 06, 2025 01:09AM
Hell Bent (Alex Stern, #2)

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Mostly enjoying it but Bardugo is overdoing it on the obvious reminders/references to things that just happened. You don’t have to call out three times that Alex is worried about X thing that happened if I already know what happened and how Alex felt about it. Just comes across as filler material or like you think your audience needs a lot more help/leading than they do.
Jan 31, 2023 03:01PM
Hell Bent (Alex Stern, #2)


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