Amanda’s Reviews > How I became Lotus Raine...the porn star > Status Update

I don't know what was worse: the writing, the story, or the message.

“Let me guess,” Reggie said. “The camera adds ten pounds of ugly.”

Of course it does, but only to women, right? I HATE REGGIE (heroine's best (female) friend). And Lucy isn't much better. And Brent has zero personality beside his dick.

“Every girl wants to fall in love. And most books are about just that.”

No, that's not all girl's primary goal.

And also, way to undermine the entire book industry. There are books about much more than love.

Out of all the new adults I've read, this one is definitely one of the worst written.

Also, Lucy doesn't have a big problem with the hero (who's a porn star), but when a female porn star shows, it's all contempt, hate at first sight, and endless shaming. Double standard? Why yes, yes indeed.

Out of all the new adults I've read, this one is definitely one of the worst written.

Also, Lucy doesn't have a big problem with the hero (who's a porn star), but when a female porn star shows, it's all contempt, hate at first sight, and endless shaming. Double standard? Why yes, yes indeed.

Of course that’s what anyone would assume. That I changed for a guy. Because that’s what us women do. Insert sarcasm here.

Well, based on the story so far, it was Brent who changed the heroine. Maybe the author didn't mean for it to be that way, but the way it's written makes it perfectly clear that is how it went.

So, apparently, the first the heroine does anal there is basically no preparation before the hero goes in, and the only lube used is on the hero.

WHY NOT DO THE FUCKING RESEARCH? THE KEY IS LOTS OF PREP AND LUBE. jeez

“The key to this going smoothly, is for you to relax your body. Don’t tense up. I’m going to try my hardest to keep that from happening."

NO THE KEY IS TO USE LOTS OF LUBE.

The funny part about it is people push aside these real life possibilities while reading a fictional story. It makes absolutely no sense to me. Just freaking go with it folks.

Yeah, so let's all be racist, sexist, abusive, and what the fuck ever. Just go with it, right?

“For every action there is an equal and opposite reaction,” Brent quoted Newton’s Third Law of Motion almost shocking the panties right off of me. Not because I was a closest physicist. But because Brent was obviously more than just a pretty face and bangin’ body.

Sorry (not sorry) for not being impressed by this. Newton's laws are basic physics; (almost) everyone knows them.