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also what a stupid condition to the spell

oh wow
i am so-o-o-o shocked
she did it to herself
gasp

"let it kill me, i dont care. the past weeks have been the best of my life, and if i only have days with you then that's better than living iwthout you"

how did it somehow get progressively worse with every chapter

"'Please don't make this harder for me, Scott!' she cried"
why
in a hospital
this scene is painful

5 week time line
instalove
love confessions, talks about kids, key exchange, emergency contacts all within 2 weeks
overdramatic
i- blah

okay now see if this nonsense wall dream metaphor (more points for subtlety) comes back and shes like oh wow i was wrong! the wall is me pushing everyone and my feelings aside
wow revelation

ill scream

end of ch 30
ridiculous build up
v subtle

Ahhhh insta love
My favourite thing 🙂

And sayinf things like hes so vulnerable and i could talk to him forever after three brief meetings with no evidence to that effect