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This started strong, but there are a couple of cliches that bored me. Kissen’s actions in the tavern and Arren faux-attacking Elo are both scenes I’ve seen in many other stories, and there was no twist to either of these here to make them fresh or interesting. The other comment I have so far is that the relationship between Elo and Arren should be LEAKING with tensions and conflict and messy emotions, but it’s not.
— Mar 06, 2025 10:08PM
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