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Becca Edney
is 3% done
The SPAG definitely seems to be better so far, and there are a few places where the narrative has been tidied up. I'm cautiously hopeful.
I do, however, have to ask Willow why she went out of a way to get out a mirror and look at herself when she hates the sight of her own reflection.
— Jul 12, 2016 01:09AM
I do, however, have to ask Willow why she went out of a way to get out a mirror and look at herself when she hates the sight of her own reflection.
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Becca Edney
is 60% done
Willow continues to infuriate me. Also, she's had a personality shift; this new self-righteous hander-out of sass was not present earlier in the book.
— Jul 19, 2016 03:30PM
Becca Edney
is 58% done
Willow has graduated from quite annoying to incredibly annoying, and overall this book is becoming genuinely a chore to read
— Jul 19, 2016 04:55AM
Becca Edney
is 55% done
Suddenly! Plot! Completely new villain right the hell out of nowhere! Senseless murder of a female character and rape threats against underage girls purely to show that the villain is evil! New powers as the plot demands! Do I really have to finish?
— Jul 17, 2016 11:57PM
Becca Edney
is 42% done
I've just read three chapters detailing how special Willow is, and one detailing how the one person who doesn't worship the ground she walks is making deals with the Devil. Just sayin'.
(Also, she still hasn't remembered Mrs Waddington getting arrested)
— Jul 15, 2016 02:27PM
(Also, she still hasn't remembered Mrs Waddington getting arrested)
Becca Edney
is 26% done
I have so many questions about Willow's relationship with the rest of the town.
Also, I'm keeping count of how long it is before she thinks about Mrs Waddington again.
— Jul 15, 2016 02:00AM
Also, I'm keeping count of how long it is before she thinks about Mrs Waddington again.
Becca Edney
is 17% done
Still better, but also still suffering from some worldbuilding and style problems
— Jul 12, 2016 03:04PM
Becca Edney
is starting
Restarting - For Love of a Book has sent out a new edition, hopefully now with fewer glaring SPAG errors!
— Jul 11, 2016 06:42AM
Becca Edney
is on page 81 of 272
The plot has arrived, along with some suggestion of the Council actually having genuine coercive power. Unfortunately, it came packaged with an entire chapter reminding us of how incredibly special Willow is.
— Jul 06, 2016 11:30AM
Becca Edney
is on page 52 of 272
The plot is still hanging around somewhere, but I've long since lost track of who all the characters are.
— Jul 05, 2016 11:36AM
