Kristina ’s Reviews > A Bachelor's Proposal > Status Update
Kristina
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She tells him she isn’t ready for dating but he pushes it with her and now he’s realizing she isn’t ready for dating and is going to pull back? Nice guy.
Authors set up these conflicts and expect us to like their hero afterwards. Nope. Sorry Bud, get lost.
— Feb 16, 2025 02:20PM
Authors set up these conflicts and expect us to like their hero afterwards. Nope. Sorry Bud, get lost.
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Kristina
is 63% done
The conflict in this is fabricated in each of the MC’s minds and would be solved with a five minute conversation. This premise always sucks because there isn’t enough meat to carry a plot.
— Feb 16, 2025 03:21PM
Kristina
is 42% done
A seventh grader can’t skip school without everyone being alerted. My kid was in school and miscounted once and I got a text, an email and a phone call and so did my husband. The alarm was raised until she was found in her seat in class.
— Feb 16, 2025 11:27AM
Kristina
is 21% done
This feels nostalgic to cheesy 1990s Harlequins, mainly because it is a cheesy 1990s Harlequin that the author is reissuing. She says she updated it but people are using cameras and talking about brochures when today people would have cell phones and talk about social media campaigns.
Get back in there and do some more updating CJ 🤣. Also being a career woman is not a rare thing in 2025.
— Feb 16, 2025 07:12AM
Get back in there and do some more updating CJ 🤣. Also being a career woman is not a rare thing in 2025.
Kristina
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I know it’s a pivotal part of the plot but what kind of idiot invests their kid’s inheritance in a heli-ski business to the tune of half a million dollars?
I’m sure it will work out but yikes, look into the bond market.
— Feb 15, 2025 08:29PM
I’m sure it will work out but yikes, look into the bond market.
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Feb 16, 2025 02:21PM
Yep. Kick him to the curb!
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