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This is. Interesting.
At the moment, Cassidy's story is way more interesting. I think Nelson is much stronger at 1st person than 3rd person narration. However, Cassidy's story feels very disjointed, and it breaks up the main story. I'm not sure where this is going, but I intrigued, not annoyed (... Yet. And hopefully it doesn't get that far). I don't like the idolization of Cassidy, but maybe that's the point.
— Feb 10, 2025 11:06AM
At the moment, Cassidy's story is way more interesting. I think Nelson is much stronger at 1st person than 3rd person narration. However, Cassidy's story feels very disjointed, and it breaks up the main story. I'm not sure where this is going, but I intrigued, not annoyed (... Yet. And hopefully it doesn't get that far). I don't like the idolization of Cassidy, but maybe that's the point.
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