Graydon Stevens’s Reviews > The Kill Factor > Status Update

This book is great so far. The characters are likeable and interesting and I'm interested to see what happens in the book. Although, there are a few things that keep this book from being golden so far. The shift between Emerson not going on the game to deciding to go is too quick of a transition. We should have spent more time developing Emerson as a character instead of going right into the action. Great so far!