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Rylee Clare
is on page 77 of 367
it’s getting a bit easier to read. i liked the pages discussing hell and found a few memorable/relatable quotes. still feels like im reading ADHD word vomit. i still feel like she’s using punctuation wrong and other grammar things. but this last section was a LOT better than the beginning.
— Feb 06, 2025 01:26PM
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Rylee Clare
is on page 60 of 367
how many times is she going to refer to “the wedding people”. i’m getting so pissed. on some books it works and in some it doesn’t. this is one of those times where it doesn’t, it really doesn’t. ig it’s starting to get slightly better. she’s said some relatable things but i’m gonna need a lot more to give this a good rating.
— Feb 04, 2025 06:02PM
Rylee Clare
is on page 43 of 367
this feels like it was written by ADHD. it just keeps going from topic to topic to topic. i still can’t get over the writing. i feel it’s not using proper grammar and literary tools. i’m getting really angry reading this.
— Feb 04, 2025 12:29AM
Rylee Clare
is on page 21 of 367
oh god it’s written in the 3rd person. reading this is making me feel dyslexic. i have to reread almost every line three times it’s literally gibberish. Phoebe is so negative and dreary. i get she’s suicidal but give me some emotion, some feeling. i wish this was written in the 1st person. it would have been way better. so far i want to DNF.
— Feb 03, 2025 07:56PM
