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Jennifer Hajdics
is 28% done
I'm liking the story but the vocabulary is too scripted. It comes off as fake.
— Jun 20, 2016 09:14AM
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Jennifer Hajdics
is 34% done
...and now all the characters have British accents in my head because of the language the author uses. I hate when this happens. Your characters are from Nebraska and Connecticut. They live in NY. Make me believe it author!
— Jun 20, 2016 09:41AM
Jennifer Hajdics
is 32% done
"If I had my druthers?" Wtf? What century is this story supposed to be set in?!?
— Jun 20, 2016 09:35AM
Jennifer Hajdics
is 18% done
"My delicate rose of delight?" Is there a reason some authors can't use the work clit? Why make it sound ridiculous?
— Jun 20, 2016 08:13AM
