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Chapter 3-6: After a long break from this story, it seems like this is when it’ll start getting interesting. The battle between Maxwell and Jasmine plus Steven was good. The zodiac powers do seem cool and look forward to learning about them more.

Chapter 2 1/2-3 1/2: Ok so far I’m feeling this would’ve been better in comic book form than book form. Not saying the story is bad, but the situation that is currently happening is very comic bookish. The main character seeing a situation and stays to see what happens so he can stop it. And the villain being cocky because he’s evil. Just saying it’s very comic generic.

Chapter 1-2 1/2: We’ve went straight into the action within the first ten pages. Which is a little weird to me. I know it’s suppose to be comic book in book form. But it’s way to early in the book to be getting into what he villains are doing.