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I want to like this book, but a few nit-picks are getting to me. First, there are so many run-on and/or improper sentences that I can't settle into the rhythm of reading. Second, a couple of the key characters aren't believable - mainly Jenny and Billy. Their behaviour isn't really how any person would behave. And third, I've acquired a strong distaste for first-person narrative. But we'll see how it goes.