I should be loving this...but I'm not...and it's making me sad. There's all the tension of an overcooked noodle. This needs an editor with a machete, because the amount of extraneous or repetitive information is seriously killing any and all sense of action or conflict.
Also "palpitate" and "palpate" are not interchangeable.
— Jul 24, 2018 04:16PM
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