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As much as I love Sam and Bailey, I hate how many times the perspective changes in one chapter

I think this might be my favorite in the series so far…. That or Foul Play

I quit…. I just realized her business name is the title. But I love teh characters in this one so much more

Priorities: steal bodyguard who makes bacon

Quite fast paced in comparison. I know he’s the bad guy, but I love the name Adken.

I love Roma and Juliette

What’s the point of the first 35 chapters if chapter 36 is basically them recapping everything??????

Sabriel: 4.5/5

Thought the alpaca was cool (still do). But knowing what this… Nope.

Bailey is awesome.

The Boys’ Club: 3

I just feel bad for Noah and Mohammed. Also, is Mallory trying to set Naomi up with George or Mohammed???????

This series has:
-winking
-I think
-I’m sorry
-I think you’re right/I think so
-And/But/Because sentence starters
-lots of dialogue
-too long of chapters
-telling over showing
-short paragraphs

What’s with all the winking?

The Exchange: 3.5
It was decent, but the relationships feel rushed. Where in London is this? I imagine somewhere like Stratford Upon Avon, even if it is outside the city, since it gives country vibes, but it also can’t be too far cause Buckingham Palace.

I actually prefer Noah and Mallory together.

These chapters could’ve easily been split into multiple with each day being a part.

I actually recognize some fo the plots even if I forget the name of the tale. At least this is modern and not middle.

So basically, every relationship falls apart?

Feels like there's unneccesary perspectives, Madison, Boaden, Enden, Sedrik.....

The first sixteen of book 3 should've been with book 2

Book 2: 2/5

There's too many character POVs and too many times it switches from third to first and back again. And then there's the random italicized paragraphs that don't make any sense at all.