This isn't working for me. The main character is hard to like and is, by necessity, passive (being dead will do that to you). There's no tension and not much by way of pathos or passion. There is strong sense of how dreary, grubby, small-minded and soul destroying the school is but that's not enough to keep me engaged. The pacing doesn't work. It's slow and meandering with nothing urging me to read the next page.
— Aug 08, 2025 05:33AM
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