I’m enjoying the story so far, but I am itching to edit it. There are extra words in sentences, punctuation in incorrect places, sentences that start in the wrong places, and even occasions when one person’s dialogue is in the same short paragraph as another person’s dialogue. It needs to be heavily edited. Heavily. But the story is good enough to keep me reading... So far...
— Jan 20, 2019 06:16PM
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