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So much craziness seems like all this action is not really story but filler...

I thought the ending to this part was going to keep the slow pace it picked up a bit. Sounds like s Bonnie and Clyde story. Onto the rest...

Kind of a weird chapter...this book goes up and down with the story line.

What a weird ending to that chapter. Now the main characters go missing from the town...because of what they did that was a weird twist.

Wow Peter how did you not recognize the mystery person in the building...I didn't see that coming...

Like if that's not a creepy end to that chapter where did the kids go...

Are that to destroy rats in one chapter...where are all the good parts going...

Looks like the beginning of Max learning how to use the flute for his protection...

This Peter chapter very much has slowed down not sure what is going to happen next but I'm ready for it to pick up again...

What a long chapter I feel Max's chapters are more exciting that Peter's. This was one long walk through a forest and discovering others in the woods...

I thought this chapter was slow it picked up a bit...

This was the longest chapter so far reminded me a lot of Aladdin's character from the movie, very street rat kind of character that Peter is in this part...

I thought Max has perished but it was only the normal version of himself that was dead now...now to see what happens...

What a weird chapter I feel this chapter was just to show what the flute could do it was a filler of a chapter...

WOW what the heck just happened...I so was not expecting that...that was a dark ending to this chapter...

I thought this was the start of Beauty and the Beast's tale but more about a witch...

I almost thought that chapter was going to be filler until it picked up halfway through wow that got crazy real quick...

That was a weird argument between these characters didn't see that coming.

Kind of a slow chapter of Snow and the wolf...

The beginning of the chapter was kinda slow then picked up to a story that caught my attention about how something is passed down the line of family over the years...

Just a filler chapter nothing interesting...

Kind of an interesting start to Bo Peep's story...and how she meets Peter Piper as a young person...

It's like watching a new version of Once upon a Time...I'm really enjoying this story already...I liked the take on this new updated interpretation of a story that's never been told.

I already like where this is going great chapter set up.

This doesn't really start at page 1 this is really like page 4 right now I'm already pulled into the story...

Looks like the beginning to a new adventure onto book 2.

That's the end of her that was quick...

Just when you think the villains were done they come back...

Now that was cool a battle I could actually see it as it happened in my head...

Finally he finds his crew...lots of action right now...