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Interesting and confusing

Hmmm

Just ok so far

The author’s college experience was much more interesting than mine

Ok

Interesting but slow

Quit teasing and just kill this dude

Good riddance. Some people need a killin

One note. And reminiscent of when the 6th grade boys tried to out gross each other in our creative writing exercises.

Still one note

Interesting and gross and also kind of boring. Very one note.

Finally getting around to this one as I kept seeing it everywhere. So far it’s what I expected

Kind of want it to move along. Really don’t care for this flashback construction

It’s interesting but frustrating. The flash backs then return to present structure doesn’t seem to really add to the story. Just makes this annoying “jumpiness” to the narrative that just feels like it’s delaying any real progress and takes some of the enjoyment out

Interesting but could almost use a cliff notes in advance to understand the world building. Who’s who and what’s what would be more helpful then the list of names it added. What’s a demon exactly etc etc