Into the last third of the book, this is starting to feel a bit too YA as the MC fights for justice. I understand the writers' stance on revolution, but in terms of storytelling it does not land well. This tonal switch is incredibly jarring and, in my opinion, it takes away from the grounded-ness of the entire first 2/3rds of the book. I will finish it cause sunk cost fallacy, but I'm not a huge fan of this last part
— Nov 15, 2025 04:43PM
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