So you’re telling me that we can spend 40 pages going over the story of Jonah and the whale, 35 pages going over different types of whales, and a whole chapter explaining what ambergris is when it doesn’t even play into the plot in any meaningful way, but a major character gets sick and dies in the span of one 10ish page chapter? This is just a series of ramblings tied together with no concern for the plot.
— Jan 27, 2024 03:57PM
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