I can’t…. At least not right now. The writing is so clunky. The dialogue is poorly written and the scene building is difficult to follow. I keep trying to build this world in my head but it just doesn’t make sense. This reads like a poorly written YA with an emotionally stunted FMC who can’t communicate. If it was established that language is limited in this environment maybe I’d be more on board?
— Dec 06, 2023 08:59AM
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