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There is a lot going on already. So many Povs that it's gard to figure out if they are important to the main story line.

This book is in the running for top 10 most boring books. 😂

I'm not a fan of POV jumping. It seems everywhere sentence is someone else's POV. This book is gonna be a no for me for many reasons.

Barely started, but I can already tell it's going to be an exceptional read.

Wow, okay. That tok a turn I was not expecting and am a little creeper out about. I mean, there's dark, then there's going too far. This is too far. TOO FAR!!!

The amount of ! Marks are insane in this story. One sentence had 5. Every page there's between 2-5, it seems like. Sometimes way more. That's way too many.

It is definitely fast passed with the romance. It is hard to believe anyone would feel comfortable after days of being in Adiras' situation, to start thinking of kissing or finding someone attractive.

I don't think I would allow anyone to touch me, let alone bring me to their personal home. Cop or not.

Alice is definitely an emotional character. It can be a bit overwhelming at times.

She has a hard time believing anything Sebastian says to her.

I also do not like when characters get jealous of past relationships. There's a reason they are in the past. Or, in this case, hookups.

I did feel in this short time that I messed out on a lot of tension building and that growth for emotional attachment between the two MCs.

A lot of their interactions were off page. And that did render their chemistry when they started to get more sexually connected. It made it feel to be sudden and not believable.

The second chapter was basically her saying I'm pregnant over and over again. 13 plus times. We get after the first announcement. You don't need to be told that many times.