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First arc was really good.
The French Revolution story is not what I was expecting though.

Not the fucking bees

So far the most interesting thing about this has been the oracles. The prose is very juvenile and the characters are pretty shallow. I sincerely hope it picks up later because this has been a pretty disappointing 10 chapters. Maybe the remaining 50 will make a difference.

Lord Henry is the bane of my existence

I miss chapter 1/2
The prose is still really good tho

The prose is so much better than I imagined. To the point that I want to start over again.

The prose is so much better than I imagined. To the point that I want to start over again.

The prose is so much better than I imagined. To the point that I want to start over again.

I wish there was more development with Hector tbh. Also the “cast” of the novel is way, way smaller than it was irl?

175 pages into the book i decided to watch paris is burning, and… what????

The second part sort of just jumps forward and skips bits that could have been super interesting.