This is a slog and a half, where a linguistic lightness of tough is required (IMO) in a story like this, the narrative is bludgeoned to death under the most pompously self important prose I've ever read. 6% of the way in, and literally only ONE thing has happened, padded out by masses of tangents and pointless musing by the narrator.
— Jun 02, 2016 05:29AM
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