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A bit confused on what's happening; quite a few holes in some characters that I need filled. But maybe they'll be filled by reading the next book!!!!

Okay.....far too short to be anything monumental but I guess it kept my attention well enough. On to the next?

Did not finish....still can't believe I paid $5 for this...

Skimmed the last like twenty chapters but still good!

JUST WOW. WHERES THE NEXT ONE

JUST DIRTY. FILTHY.

Oh my god....that sex scene.......

This is basically gay werewolf Twilight....and I am LOVING IT

"Do you wanna have sex and THEN talk?"

This is so awkward. I feel like I should be editing this not just reading it....

HOW did he shift? Where did the clothes go? What does Matteo's shift feel like? Where are the personalities of these characters? It's like they only have actions.

I love this theme but I might demand my money back for this one. It simple isn't hashed out well enough for me to be willing to spend $5 on it. I really love this whole concept but it seems like this is the first draft.... And I shouldn't have to pay for a first draft of a book.

Ummmm there was definitely a page break there....I paid $5 for an unedited book?¿

Comma splices

Tense changes throw me off. This def needs some editing.

DeMatteo falls kind of flat for me.

He couldn't have done this in a more painful way

I think I'm done with this one....def not my favorite.

Both of those endearments are frustrating and make me wanna throw the book....

Shit!!!!! He and Ty are secretly dragons too!!!!

Wesley is so funny. He always misses the important parts lol

This started out so good........

Treasure is a dumb endearment........

BRA. VO.

THIS. IS. TOO. SHORT.

"I guess that's good because I think you might've knocked me up, man."

Great job, Liam. Great job.

LOVING. THIS.

I don't blame Tristan. Who wants their child to be the werewolf Jesus?

Is it wrong that I don't care about Ushna's POV?????