End of Part I: The Slave. A couple thoughts:
1. Not sure about the motivations of Eo here, seemed like an odd choice at the end that doesn’t make sense.
2. Not a fan of the prose at all & I’m not a big prose complainer. The dialogue has been solid but anything involving actions feels disjointed and written in the most passive, generic voice I’ve seen. I hope he improves because I can’t take 7 books of this
— Dec 10, 2024 06:08PM
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