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c l ! T should NEVER be referred to as a nubbin. Wtf 😂🤢 the dialogue in this is so uncomfortable.

Interesting premise. I kind of figured the twist half way through. I wish the story had been fleshed out a bit better. Again with the betraying body syndrome. I have no problem with this, but the way it’s executed is weird. I’m not sure why the others, jake and Gavin they made it seem like there was chemistry. Why is Ryder falling in love with her? Very confused as there is very little chemistry

Not sure how much I like the writing. It seems like an interesting story, however this seems very rushed. Why is he calling her baby. Her reaction to him doesn’t really make any logical sense given the circumstances. I usually don’t care about the betraying body syndrome, but this really makes absolutely no sense.