Status Updates From O Hipnotista

It's exhausting how unrealistic everyone is acting. There's only so far I can suspend my disbelief.

This is so weirdly written. Oddly stiff, disjointed, and staccato. No one speaks like actual human beings. None of their reactions make much sense. Maybe it's the case of this being the writer couple's first joint publication, but so far I don't get the hype at all.