Status Updates From The Vintner's Luck (Vintner...

"Paul put his hat on, then tore it off again, threw it down and crushed it into the dry chalk. Then, much to the entertainment of the harvesters, he strode back to the road cursing." [insert a don román clip]
getting WAY too fucking sappy for my tastes tbh

revising my opinions. this is fun lk

this premise should not be this boring

the lack of homophobia & the lack of sodomy talk bother me a lot lk

"bare skin and colourless nipples, as innocent as a child’s" EWWWWWW also the italics are pissing me the fuck off. must every five chapters have a full phrase with this cheap emphasis????

I like the style so far.

DNF

DNF